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Darkened Days, Fearful Nights

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She lights up your world
but you darken her day.
You starve her of salvation.
With every kiss
you posin her blood, her lips.
She gasps as you put you hand atop
her fragile lips to hush the screams.
You gaze into her souless eyes
and kiss her chest
and continue down, devouring
the rest of her body.
She whimpers, the tears start
to emerge from those darkened
eyes.
They stary to widen as you
take all you can get.
Fists clenched, nails
digging into the sheets,
she fidgets, and finally
You have won control.
She lys still, and you
continue on.
Poem.

-RedLeigh
Septmeber 19,2011

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IvanHattori's avatar
*typo spotted: "you hand"

This is one of your darker poems, almost a horrific sense to it. It just gives you... almost a... idk, horrible feeling while reading it (which is a good thing).