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A single ring
rusted away by the tears
of a fallen futre.
A pure black band
to resemble the contrast of
two lovers.
A ring of letters inscripted
within the silver.
Seven words to show
the patience of love.
Seven words that withstood
time, withstood pain..
Seven words to open the
memories, to open the
past.
The sever words
she still holds onto.
I'll Always Wait For Your Love.
rusted away by the tears
of a fallen futre.
A pure black band
to resemble the contrast of
two lovers.
A ring of letters inscripted
within the silver.
Seven words to show
the patience of love.
Seven words that withstood
time, withstood pain..
Seven words to open the
memories, to open the
past.
The sever words
she still holds onto.
I'll Always Wait For Your Love.
Last time I was in love, we had matching rings.
I tend to find this ring at the randomest of times.
It brings back memories.
-Red Leigh
September 19,2011
(Critique is welcome <3 )
I tend to find this ring at the randomest of times.
It brings back memories.
-Red Leigh
September 19,2011
(Critique is welcome <3 )
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My poem of the day.
OK, REALLY random..
*Spoilers alert*
This reminds me SOOO much of something in the story that me/my sister are writing. Rathia, a character in kiko's story, ... well... its a love-ish story. She ends up dying young though, from a black corruption eating away at her magical essence. Malik, a demon, helps her through the story and builds up her relationship with Drake. (Note: in my story, Demons are tied to emotions. Malik is a demon of love).
Ayame, a character in my story, is the 'perfected' reincarnation of Rathia. Malik, still being alive due to a vampire experiment (note: My version of a vampire is a LOT different from others), ends up meeting up with Ayame. Having been corrupted by the darkness that infected Rathia previously and having been manipulated by Kira (evil character), he starts off a villain in my story. His encounters with Ayame end up bringing him back to the good side and the two end up falling in love.
There are a lot more details... but I didnt want to spoil tooooo much. Anywho, thats what it reminded me of lol
OK, REALLY random..
*Spoilers alert*
This reminds me SOOO much of something in the story that me/my sister are writing. Rathia, a character in kiko's story, ... well... its a love-ish story. She ends up dying young though, from a black corruption eating away at her magical essence. Malik, a demon, helps her through the story and builds up her relationship with Drake. (Note: in my story, Demons are tied to emotions. Malik is a demon of love).
Ayame, a character in my story, is the 'perfected' reincarnation of Rathia. Malik, still being alive due to a vampire experiment (note: My version of a vampire is a LOT different from others), ends up meeting up with Ayame. Having been corrupted by the darkness that infected Rathia previously and having been manipulated by Kira (evil character), he starts off a villain in my story. His encounters with Ayame end up bringing him back to the good side and the two end up falling in love.
There are a lot more details... but I didnt want to spoil tooooo much. Anywho, thats what it reminded me of lol